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The Offer — Scene 2 Generation Sheet
PARKED — do not generate from this yet. Written against the outline; the
screenplay (`the-offer.fountain`) has since changed. Regenerate this sheet
from the final script before use.
Companion to `luthers-dilemma.md` (Scene 2 — The refusal). One entry = one AI
video generation. Paste the BOILERPLATE block into every prompt, then add the
clip's own text. This is the dialogue scene: **every Luther speech is
recorded separately and played as VO over cutaways** — his mouth is never the
shot's subject while he speaks. **No legible writing in any generated
frame**; the contract stays folded or shows only its back.
BOILERPLATE (paste into every prompt)
Live-action cinematic footage, Germany 1539. Soft midday light through small
leaded windows, muted earthy colors, shallow depth of field, quiet
concentrated mood.
- LUTHER: heavyset man in his mid-fifties, clean-shaven, short dark curly
- hair under a black scholar's cap, plain black scholar's gown over a white
- shirt. Calm, stubborn, at ease. (Identical to the Scene 3 sheet.)
- HEAD PRINTER: a broad man in his sixties, grey beard, ink-stained
- leather apron over a good dark doublet, weathered hands. (Identical to the
- Scene 1 sheet.)
- TWO OR THREE PRINTERS: younger masters in clean aprons, hats in hand —
- they have come as petitioners.
- SETTING: Luther's own small print shop and study — a single modest
- press, a broad worktable, shelves of books, a large worn Bible lying open on
- a reading desk.
- The folded contract prop recurs: palm-sized, folded in quarters, outer faces
- blank. Same paper as Scenes 1 and 3.
Clips (in cut order)
S2-01 — Arrival (medium-wide, ~5s)
The printers file in through the shop door, hats in hand, the head printer
last with the folded contract held like something fragile. Camera: static from
inside the room.
- Audio: door, footsteps, the town outside fading as the door closes.
- Text check: contract folded, blank. ✔
S2-02 — Luther looks up (medium, ~5s)
Luther at his worktable, reading proofs. He looks up at the delegation and a
faint, knowing smile crosses his face — he's heard it all before. Camera: slow
push on Luther.
- Audio: quiet room; his VO, dry: **"Three times you have come to me with
- this."**
- Text check: proofs on table unreadable. ✔
S2-03 — The pitch (medium on the printers, ~7s)
The head printer makes the case, earnest, gesturing once toward the town
outside; the younger printers nod along. Camera: favor the group; the head
printer three-quarter angle so lip-sync is soft.
- Audio: his VO: **"Wittenberg's fortunes are your books, Doctor — and Leipzig
- is circling. We ask only first access to what you write. Leipzig cannot
- print what they never receive."**
- Text check: ✔
S2-04 — The slide (insert, ~4s)
Top-down insert on the worktable: the folded contract slid across toward
Luther's side. A beat — then Luther's hand pushes it back, unopened. Camera:
locked-off insert.
- Audio: paper sliding on wood, twice. Nothing else.
- Text check: folded, blank faces. ✔
S2-05 — Gift of grace (Luther, ~8s)
Luther speaks without heat, looking at the printers, then down at his own
ink-stained hands. Camera: medium side profile, then a cut-in on the hands —
his mouth never fills the frame.
- Audio: his VO (from the Table Talk): **"God has raised me in a fatherly way,
- me and my whole household, and given me everything freely — without payment.
- Shall I sell His gift of grace back to Him?"**
- Text check: ✔
S2-06 — Fair business (printers, ~5s)
A younger printer protests — palms open, reasonable: no one is asking him to
sell grace; it's a contract, like any author signs. Camera: on the printer,
with Luther's unmoved profile in soft foreground.
- Audio: printer's VO to that effect; keep it brief and deferential.
- Text check: ✔
S2-07 — Quite enough (Luther + Bible insert, ~8s)
Luther answers, wry and content; mid-speech, cut to a slow insert of the worn
open Bible on its desk, then back to the printers listening. Camera: medium on
Luther angled away → Bible insert → printers.
- Audio: his VO: **"The Elector gives me two hundred gulden a year I
- never asked of him. God has given me a wife and children — a most beautiful
- blessing. I have quite enough, and I am satisfied."**
- Text check: Bible pages as texture only — no legible print. ✔
S2-08 — "At least look" (head printer, ~5s)
The head printer steps forward, picks the folded contract off the table, and
holds it out to Luther — almost a plea. Camera: medium two-shot, head printer's
back quarter to camera.
- Audio: his VO: "At least look at what you are refusing."
- Text check: folded. ✔
S2-09 — The read (THE shot — close-up Luther, ~8s)
Luther takes the paper and unfolds it. Camera locked on his face over the
back of the sheet — the audience never sees its face. A long silence. His
eyes move across the writing once. **His face gives nothing away — no reaction
at all.** Camera: slow, almost imperceptible push.
- Audio: paper unfolding, then held silence — let it sit.
- Text check: critical — back of sheet only; reject any bleed-through. ✔
S2-10 — The boast (Luther folds it back, ~7s)
He folds the paper back up with the same calm and slides it across the table.
The printers' shoulders drop as they listen. Camera: hands insert on the fold
and slide, then medium on the deflating printers.
- Audio: his VO: **"In all my life I have never sold a single copy, nor
- lectured for a fee — and I mean to carry that boast into the grave. Having
- food and clothing, I shall be content."**
- Text check: folded, blank. ✔
S2-11 — The last card (head printer, ~5s)
A beat of defeat — then the head printer, gathering the contract, tries one
more thing; the younger printers exchange a look. Camera: medium on the head
printer, angled.
- Audio: his VO: "Then speak with Katharina. Perhaps she'll persuade you."
- Text check: ✔
S2-12 — Luther takes it (medium-wide, ~5s)
Luther sighs — the first crack in his composure, exasperation not temptation —
takes the folded paper from the table, and walks out the door. The printers
watch him go. Camera: static wide, door closing.
- Audio: footsteps, door; the room's silence after.
- Text check: folded, in his hand — matches the paper he carries into
- Scene 3. ✔
Continuity checklist (check every generation)
- Luther identical to the Scene 3 sheet; head printer identical to Scene 1's.
- Same room throughout: one press, worktable, book shelves, Bible desk.
- Midday light, consistent direction, all clips.
- The contract is the same palm-sized quarter-folded paper across all three
- scenes, blank outer faces.
- No legible text in any generated frame — the number exists only in
- Scene 3's INSERT-01.
- Luther's speeches are VO over cutaways; his mouth is never the subject while
- he speaks.